The English presentation of this paper, though improved, is still not satisfactory. Please consider further revision, with help from a professional editor. Please be aware that this will be the last chance for you to revise your paper. Your paper will be declined if it cannot be accepted in the next round.
Reviewer #3: Major Proofreading and Editing Needed
There are still numerous grammatical errors and incorrect sentence structures throughout the paper that interrupt the reader's ability to comprehend what the authors are saying. The order of words in a sentence written in English can be very different from other languages.
I strongly recommend that the authors have a native English-speaking editor (someone who has learned and used English as their main language since early childhood) review this revision before it is accepted for publication. For suggestions on where to find such editing services, ASCE provides this link for authors: